Wednesday, 20 November 2013

Quickwrite - Imagery

#779
dinosaur ambulance

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The doctor heard a loud ring of the telephone and immediately runs to it. He answers it as quickly as possible and makes his way out of the hospital. Waiting for him outside is a humongous loud, rough looking creature. He makes his way onto the dinosuor and holds on tight. The dinosuor begins to sprint, after running for a minute he begins to flap his giant wings almost deafening the doctor. Soon enough, the doctor and the dinasour are flying to their patient. Within minutes they are above the patients house and the flapping of the dinosaur's wings starts to die down. The doctor feels himself and the dinosaur falling in mid air. Just when they get close to the ground the dinosaur starts flapping his oversized wings again, landing the both of them safety and quickly. The doctor jumps off the dinosaur and gets a tingly feeling in his feet from the long jump. He pats the dinosaur on the chest as if to say "thanks" and runs into his patients house. He hears loud crying and wailing of the word help from upstairs and makes his way up the very loud creaky staircase. He pushes open the bathroom door and sees a woman lying on the ground, he can't tell what her problem is, but knows she needs help. He picks her up off the ground and hears a loud grunt from the woman. He carries her out of the house and places her onto the dinosaur. He makes sure both him and his patient are safe for takeoff before patting the dinosaur. The dinosaur takes off immediately and the loud flapping of his wings returns. They quickly make their way back to the hospital, the doctor rushes his patient into the hospital, ignoring all other patients and pedestrians. Hours later, the doctor greats his patient in her room with a glass of water. He asks her how she's doing and in a very quiet, raspy voice, she replies "okay". 

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